So let me start with something different now… Normally I would do some recounting of the whole story. But, is a bad idea since there is too much effort put in here that I do not want to spoil too much stuff. Normally I would do this: I mostly try to review per route but, I know there is just too much to cover it. So this time I’m going to do some key timings that I enjoyed while playing. After that I will review per department: Audio, Narration/writing, Art, and finally eye candy~. I know the game isn’t finished!
Before, I start doing a full review. Here is what I can say for anyone looking for a little push to start reading: If you can stand gore imagery and descriptions, go for it. It is more intense sometimes than Doom… and that is saying something. It is brutal sometimes. But, ignoring all gore. It does stand by a strong story and likable characters, only when they don’t go all demonic and chaotic full gore. Besides, their adventure is a fun one. I had a good deal of laughter, too many that I got my family members asking me if I was alright. I was enjoying the little talks and teasing to each other. It has a good atmosphere, and they focus on personality between them. I was immersed in the story since it does play a lot of realism in how a fantasy world would look like. If, it was taken realistically in the sense of fighting.
So first let’s go for personality:
Per character personality:
Akai, the main character, a lonely wolf: He is a mercenary, and earned a title for killing people in a certain way. I will save some info. He fights a lone, but with the new people he meets he gets a full 180 happening to him becoming a caring wolf. But, when meeting with our choices to date aka his future fellow demons… He becomes a Horny wolf if you want to make him. Also, he really did live by solitude sometimes. According to the time of the last build, he has lost 4 dear people he was trusting and considered family. Two of them were his family, the other 2 were fellow mercenary that help him.
Tchort, the ??????: This character is a prideful one. He enjoys torture and killing. And that is his good side. His altered personality or true demon form is a killing machine and is cold in the way he kills. He is a psychopath.
Red, the croc: This guy is a tsundere, but not the typical tsundere. He is stubborn and shows he doesn’t care for you… at first. If you interact with him more, it has a sweet spot for you. I choose him first. I enjoyed his interactions he will try to act all tough, but he actually is tough. But feelings are hard to hide. He cares for you if you try to break the barrier that he uses.
His alter personality or true demon form is a berserk fighter, and oh boy! Do not mess with him! He is dangerous~. Even if you do get him to try it with you, he will still try to do some damage to you. He still loses his temper so easily that he could destroy you. And he is brutal, all right. I almost puked after imagining the scenes during one of Akai’s nightmares. This scene was Red’s nightmare of distrust… and was agonizingly brutal.
Drago, the dragon: Drago is a teasing one. He loves to tease a lot. Also, he hates that people treat him all high and mighty due to him been a dragon. Additionally, he really is a lustful dragon if you meet him alone. In addition, he has some sense of high decency, if you can say that… His demon form or alter personality is an Eater of people… He can eat people whole. Also, he is a scary form to mess when he loses his control over that form.
Thayne, the bull: A timid yet social bull. He is more intelligent than the others. Knowing him, he has saved Akai so many times, and helped cool down his own friends when they become demon form and lose control. As an ally, he does talk a lot, and he is social once you get to know him. He will be there to guide you in the hard times. I have yet to see him lose his temper.
Havelock, the orca: A pirate of the sea. He does take care of his tripulation. To the point of sometimes comforting Akai when he is down. The alter personality of this orca is difficult for me to identify when he does go berserk. But, he does to try to liquid a certain character for his actions, and eventually he does somewhat succeed.
There is more, but for now is barely enough to make me understand the new followers.
Now let’s review per department.
Audio: On the spot, even the eerie scenes became stronger to the point of sending chills to my body. Not only for those scenes. Also, the battles were good and enjoyable, I had imagined some… but sometimes it was too much. >.<
Narration/writing: Story: It is strong and well-placed. I saw life in this world. And their people also were living beings, not just some random npc taking. All of them had their own lives. Characters: All of them are a good bunch, I had many fun experiences with them and how they interacted with each other.
One problem… There are some inconsistencies when following some paths. And informed one of them on the recent update devlog. Also, there were some orthography problems I noticed, but sometimes they made the serious moments more fun. I’m not going to lie, yes it ruins the scene, but man some of them are common. And yes, even I do have those issues. Actually, I have a habit of reading a lot of times over. But some common mistakes still pass without me knowing.
Art: Although is rough on some aspect, it does have a charm on it. It is constant and enjoyable to look at. As for the scenes, wow do they hold up even when is on weird angles. As for the gore… well, I’m happy that there is not too much of it. Or I would have a hard time eating while I was reading this VN. The eerie parts were spot on. I had some chills running down me.
Eye candy: There is a lot. And oh boy~. Did I enjoy the ones on my path? Yes. But, since it is shared with narration, for me, they feel a bit short. I do not mean the scenes, I mean the narration of the scene. But it is probably my thing. Anyway… They are steamy~ and enjoyable to read with the accompanied art. And Red as my to go for… he is a handful yet unexpected one to get into to. I dare to say that I had fun with him… Ye, lads! I’m crazy for this croc~!
Yeahh this VN is sooooo good and very exciting story line and i cried in the scene when hunter killed accidentally by wolf.. (sorry spoilers alert hhhe) really i like this.. May be you. Should be fixed some stuff of your Vn their are several spelling and grammar are wrong written.. I hope you fixe it... Hhhhhhw by the way you have a great job..... Good luck relly I don't care the horny stuff now i really care the flow of the story... Wewww... And hory stuff is a bunos hhhhhe
Actually, I’m enjoying it. I’m according to the number of the build… let’s say… Build 1.2: “A Dragon’s Story and his Darkest Secret”.
For now, I will say is a fresh air in something I was working on… Basically showing the gray side of evil. Since evil cant be actually completely define. This one works on the grey side, not the black and white we somewhat see in other games.
Yes, im building a fantasy world too… I have been inspired by many things, and now even this shows some of the same examples I was working with. Once I finish reading, I would like to ask the Dev if he is fine with me using some of the content for inspiration.
Also, if you can’t stop thinking about it, it means that is fantastic for you. Since not every game tents to stay on someone’s mind. A good game will be remembered and even used as an example of something.
This VN is a whirlwind of emotions especially this last update. I was crying during certain parts that just hit so damn much its beautiful. I give this game Ten out of Five. Very good work BigBuffDemonBoi, and don't fret too much on the grammar its quite passable. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
Hello every one i need help i'm stuck in the game when i need to answer the 3 question, i have try evreything but every time is gameover. Pls anyone help meee🙏🙏🙏
Yeah, this was a surprisingly good VN when I found it and then had to wait quite a long time for the first couple of updates. Really hoping he's still working on it. Just gotta be patient I guess.
Apologies for making you all waiting for a long time, been busy with irl situations that I've lost touch with my VN, but with my hands back on this work, I'll try to update the game within this month or next
Honestly, Im not complaining about the wait because really its just indicating that the next update will be big. (which is great because we can play a lot of it and not have that feeling of "why dint i take this slower?" as much!
Also even if this is just a normal update, the creator isnt obligated to make it either. it just makes fruity people on the internet happy and maybe get a donation.
Hi Demonboi, I think I found an error here. This line should be Red but it labels as Little Kid, kinda bold to hear that kid talked back to a demon, especially to Red. The rest is all good. Btw I love your VN, really looking forward to your next update. Stay Safe!!!
quite literally the best visual novel i've played (emphasis on the "i've"). the story was incredibly well put together, and some parts got my feelings, to say the least. but, overall, a great vn. 10000000/10
the games good im just confused about reds scene because it said they all have one and im trying really hard to find his. besides that the game is absolutly fantastic 1000000000/10
I found that when I heard the Demon Dragon talk, I talked to Red, and after the bad ending which Drago destroy the world was triggered, even if I read the file to choose other options, he would default me to talk to Red，constantly triggering bad endings. Is this a bug?
I found that I deleted all the archives and played it again. The first time I chose to talk to other people, the demon dragon still said that I heard the whisper and talked to the crocodile, and then the bad ending was triggered. Is this what it should be?Is it a matter of favorability?
Keep on choosing "Talk to Red and you will proceed on the next day for sure, the reason why you have to talk to the crocodile is that something is about to kill him and the only way to stop it was to be seen, and if you remember, the bear was still downstairs, and when he got out of Red's room, thats when the unknown entity snuck in and slowly taking the crocodile's life.
this is a good VN, this VN have unique story line, and sometimes i kinda get an emotional feeling to the MC, i look forward to the next build. and this is some footage that i took from the game :3
I know that grammar is being addressed which is good, but I can understand the narrative really well. I think this VN is so good I cried at certain parts. Good job and please take care of yourself. 😃😃😃😃
I can't believe how much I'm tearing up at those flashbacks, I just started playing, and I'm caring this much. The music is beautiful and the scene is gut wrenching...amazing work 🥺😢😭
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que hago para sacar la escena con drago?
So let me start with something different now… Normally I would do some recounting of the whole story. But, is a bad idea since there is too much effort put in here that I do not want to spoil too much stuff. Normally I would do this: I mostly try to review per route but, I know there is just too much to cover it. So this time I’m going to do some key timings that I enjoyed while playing. After that I will review per department: Audio, Narration/writing, Art, and finally eye candy~. I know the game isn’t finished!
Before, I start doing a full review. Here is what I can say for anyone looking for a little push to start reading: If you can stand gore imagery and descriptions, go for it. It is more intense sometimes than Doom… and that is saying something. It is brutal sometimes. But, ignoring all gore. It does stand by a strong story and likable characters, only when they don’t go all demonic and chaotic full gore. Besides, their adventure is a fun one. I had a good deal of laughter, too many that I got my family members asking me if I was alright. I was enjoying the little talks and teasing to each other. It has a good atmosphere, and they focus on personality between them. I was immersed in the story since it does play a lot of realism in how a fantasy world would look like. If, it was taken realistically in the sense of fighting.
So first let’s go for personality:
Per character personality:
Akai, the main character, a lonely wolf: He is a mercenary, and earned a title for killing people in a certain way. I will save some info. He fights a lone, but with the new people he meets he gets a full 180 happening to him becoming a caring wolf. But, when meeting with our choices to date aka his future fellow demons… He becomes a Horny wolf if you want to make him. Also, he really did live by solitude sometimes. According to the time of the last build, he has lost 4 dear people he was trusting and considered family. Two of them were his family, the other 2 were fellow mercenary that help him.
Tchort, the ??????: This character is a prideful one. He enjoys torture and killing. And that is his good side. His altered personality or true demon form is a killing machine and is cold in the way he kills. He is a psychopath.
Red, the croc: This guy is a tsundere, but not the typical tsundere. He is stubborn and shows he doesn’t care for you… at first. If you interact with him more, it has a sweet spot for you. I choose him first. I enjoyed his interactions he will try to act all tough, but he actually is tough. But feelings are hard to hide. He cares for you if you try to break the barrier that he uses.
His alter personality or true demon form is a berserk fighter, and oh boy! Do not mess with him! He is dangerous~. Even if you do get him to try it with you, he will still try to do some damage to you. He still loses his temper so easily that he could destroy you. And he is brutal, all right. I almost puked after imagining the scenes during one of Akai’s nightmares. This scene was Red’s nightmare of distrust… and was agonizingly brutal.
Drago, the dragon: Drago is a teasing one. He loves to tease a lot. Also, he hates that people treat him all high and mighty due to him been a dragon. Additionally, he really is a lustful dragon if you meet him alone. In addition, he has some sense of high decency, if you can say that… His demon form or alter personality is an Eater of people… He can eat people whole. Also, he is a scary form to mess when he loses his control over that form.
Thayne, the bull: A timid yet social bull. He is more intelligent than the others. Knowing him, he has saved Akai so many times, and helped cool down his own friends when they become demon form and lose control. As an ally, he does talk a lot, and he is social once you get to know him. He will be there to guide you in the hard times. I have yet to see him lose his temper.
Havelock, the orca: A pirate of the sea. He does take care of his tripulation. To the point of sometimes comforting Akai when he is down. The alter personality of this orca is difficult for me to identify when he does go berserk. But, he does to try to liquid a certain character for his actions, and eventually he does somewhat succeed.
There is more, but for now is barely enough to make me understand the new followers.
Now let’s review per department.
Audio: On the spot, even the eerie scenes became stronger to the point of sending chills to my body. Not only for those scenes. Also, the battles were good and enjoyable, I had imagined some… but sometimes it was too much. >.<
Narration/writing: Story: It is strong and well-placed. I saw life in this world. And their people also were living beings, not just some random npc taking. All of them had their own lives. Characters: All of them are a good bunch, I had many fun experiences with them and how they interacted with each other.
One problem… There are some inconsistencies when following some paths. And informed one of them on the recent update devlog. Also, there were some orthography problems I noticed, but sometimes they made the serious moments more fun. I’m not going to lie, yes it ruins the scene, but man some of them are common. And yes, even I do have those issues. Actually, I have a habit of reading a lot of times over. But some common mistakes still pass without me knowing.
Art: Although is rough on some aspect, it does have a charm on it. It is constant and enjoyable to look at. As for the scenes, wow do they hold up even when is on weird angles. As for the gore… well, I’m happy that there is not too much of it. Or I would have a hard time eating while I was reading this VN. The eerie parts were spot on. I had some chills running down me.
Eye candy: There is a lot. And oh boy~. Did I enjoy the ones on my path? Yes. But, since it is shared with narration, for me, they feel a bit short. I do not mean the scenes, I mean the narration of the scene. But it is probably my thing. Anyway… They are steamy~ and enjoyable to read with the accompanied art. And Red as my to go for… he is a handful yet unexpected one to get into to. I dare to say that I had fun with him… Ye, lads! I’m crazy for this croc~!
Yeahh this VN is sooooo good and very exciting story line and i cried in the scene when hunter killed accidentally by wolf.. (sorry spoilers alert hhhe) really i like this.. May be you. Should be fixed some stuff of your Vn their are several spelling and grammar are wrong written.. I hope you fixe it... Hhhhhhw by the way you have a great job..... Good luck relly I don't care the horny stuff now i really care the flow of the story... Wewww... And hory stuff is a bunos hhhhhe
I literally don't care about the horny stuff anymore,im so into this story you've create
Oh? Is it that good? I might as well give it a try… This one has been under my radar to read. Now let’s see how good is it.
im not sure this story is good enough for you,but somehow I just can't stop thinking about it.i hope you can enjoy it
Actually, I’m enjoying it. I’m according to the number of the build… let’s say… Build 1.2: “A Dragon’s Story and his Darkest Secret”.
For now, I will say is a fresh air in something I was working on… Basically showing the gray side of evil. Since evil cant be actually completely define. This one works on the grey side, not the black and white we somewhat see in other games.
Yes, im building a fantasy world too… I have been inspired by many things, and now even this shows some of the same examples I was working with. Once I finish reading, I would like to ask the Dev if he is fine with me using some of the content for inspiration.
Also, if you can’t stop thinking about it, it means that is fantastic for you. Since not every game tents to stay on someone’s mind. A good game will be remembered and even used as an example of something.
Is it just me or wasnt there an nsfw sence with croc after the colosseum. I remember there being on before but its not there now?
Oh? Ill check up this bug
Rip Bruce and Corvus
This VN is a whirlwind of emotions especially this last update. I was crying during certain parts that just hit so damn much its beautiful. I give this game Ten out of Five. Very good work BigBuffDemonBoi, and don't fret too much on the grammar its quite passable. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
I need to ask
When i saw The scene and dialogue witch torch that we had in the end of this build.
My first thouth was, do we have begining of route for tchort?
Anyway i will like to See MC and Tchort as couple :)
And i like this build the new part of story was wonderfull, have a good day cant wait for next update.
(sorry if i write somthing wrong my english is not perfect)
It's indescribable how much I like this story
Sorry But, This is A Persistent problem... Unfit text
I'll separate it and will be fixed on the next update
about 3 question in the game which choice should i pick in order not to get game over
im having the same problem
What are you talking about? I know there are ways to get game overs, but I only see those in battles...where is it happening?
the dragon god ask 3 question what are they to ou, who do you save first, who you love most after i play the game but get game over
Ahh that conflict, way before that before you sleep, you HAVE to talk to Red
i tried talking but the game keeps asking me many times till it forces me to go to bed
just keep clicking "Talk to Red"
Yay, very good update, I love them all 🥰, they are so beautiful and hot
Oooohhh yes finally. I've yearn for an update! Looking forward for more! No matter how long the wait, just wishing you would finish it
Here are some of the things you need to know if you want to see the new nsfws:
1st nsfw-You must have the first nsfw of a certain croc
2nd nsfw-Proceed with the story
3rd nsfw-Make sure to check up on a certain blue derg
Just posting this here so no ones gonna fill up the comments with questions about it :3
thanks croco :3 I was looking forward to this update
i just finished version 1.5 and i cant wait for a new version to comeout the game is great so far!
Its still alive and slowly running,just cant focus on it because of irl situations, educations and stuff
ok who decided to kill a dragon at 2020 because the creator is still mad
it's version end when you have chose 3 answer?
Loving this game but is it dead?
Nope, its back in working in progress
yay hehe keep up the amazing work
Hey,is there any discord?
Yes there is it's called reds layer
Hello every one i need help i'm stuck in the game when i need to answer the 3 question, i have try evreything but every time is gameover. Pls anyone help meee🙏🙏🙏
You need talk to red
The 4th month waiting for big surprize😊
Yeah, this was a surprisingly good VN when I found it and then had to wait quite a long time for the first couple of updates. Really hoping he's still working on it. Just gotta be patient I guess.
Hey,BigBuffDemonBoi sayed to not worry. :)
Apologies for making you all waiting for a long time, been busy with irl situations that I've lost touch with my VN, but with my hands back on this work, I'll try to update the game within this month or next
Great, can't wait to see what's next!
Relax
take another perspective of this visual novel
Wish you a good day!
Just saw now that the update will be within this month or mext month
Waiting with pleasure!
Honestly, Im not complaining about the wait because really its just indicating that the next update will be big. (which is great because we can play a lot of it and not have that feeling of "why dint i take this slower?" as much!
Also even if this is just a normal update, the creator isnt obligated to make it either. it just makes fruity people on the internet happy and maybe get a donation.
Hi Demonboi, I think I found an error here. This line should be Red but it labels as Little Kid, kinda bold to hear that kid talked back to a demon, especially to Red. The rest is all good. Btw I love your VN, really looking forward to your next update. Stay Safe!!!
(edit) That's actually another kid telling the naughty kid to be more careful, that's not Red's line.
I wanna so bad an update
but i want to wait with pleasure
I'm slowly working back on the coding for the game again, not to worry
Waiting with pleasure
for the big lizard that coming from the shadows in my bed..
same XDDDDD
I hope that BigBuffDemonBoi is doing well. 🙂🙂🙂
Will there be another update coming up soon?
quite literally the best visual novel i've played (emphasis on the "i've"). the story was incredibly well put together, and some parts got my feelings, to say the least. but, overall, a great vn. 10000000/10
the games good im just confused about reds scene because it said they all have one and im trying really hard to find his. besides that the game is absolutly fantastic 1000000000/10
Red is easy, you just need make points with
Red. As Far I know that Red has one scene of NSFW unless I miss other one.
Some update in February?
can't wait for next update
Me too!
I couldnt talk to red at that last part😭
Look carefully, the options have changed positions in the fourth time
Mainly Keep clicking Talk to Red.
When will be the next Build Demonboi?
Not sure, Im still busy with my irl situations
Understand...Have a good night!
I found that when I heard the Demon Dragon talk, I talked to Red, and after the bad ending which Drago destroy the world was triggered, even if I read the file to choose other options, he would default me to talk to Red，constantly triggering bad endings. Is this a bug?
I found that I deleted all the archives and played it again. The first time I chose to talk to other people, the demon dragon still said that I heard the whisper and talked to the crocodile, and then the bad ending was triggered. Is this what it should be?Is it a matter of favorability?
Keep on choosing "Talk to Red and you will proceed on the next day for sure, the reason why you have to talk to the crocodile is that something is about to kill him and the only way to stop it was to be seen, and if you remember, the bear was still downstairs, and when he got out of Red's room, thats when the unknown entity snuck in and slowly taking the crocodile's life.
God, this option has actually changed positions!? I'm stupid
this is a good VN, this VN have unique story line, and sometimes i kinda get an emotional feeling to the MC, i look forward to the next build.
and this is some footage that i took from the game :3
I know that grammar is being addressed which is good, but I can understand the narrative really well. I think this VN is so good I cried at certain parts. Good job and please take care of yourself. 😃😃😃😃
I can't believe how much I'm tearing up at those flashbacks, I just started playing, and I'm caring this much. The music is beautiful and the scene is gut wrenching...amazing work 🥺😢😭
Is there only one NSFW scene for the bull? Is there a way to do an anal version for him or is it only the blowjob version
Ahh blowjob is the only nsfw he has for now
ah thanks was wondering if he can use your other hole since he mentioned it as an alternative LOL