can I still be able to get the key to that lusty tavern in future version if i choose to company Ruaden? i do not want make choice between Ruaden and that hot drake, guess I am really greedy😏
downloaded ver1.6 yesterday then got 1.6.5 today,what a coincidence^_^
All those characters are attractive,especially Red.he's really adorable when he got flushed or flustered,can't wait to see how cute he will be when he is topped and dominated(if there will be such sences)
Besides,just out of curiosity,how many routes will there be in total?
There will be but it may take long since red is special hehe, and as for the (if what you mean i) love routes, that is to not be decided yet since we're still close on the tip of the iceberg
Then the story should be much longer than I've expected, which is really great.hope there will be more cute or soft sides of Red to be revealed,just love the contrasts^_^
Please don't you dare to ever abandon this AMAZING VN. It is SOOO GOOOOD. I wish everything go perfect for you and you finish this masterpiece. All the best 😊
I play at the build 1.5 last time and i though oh this is good but when i see the last time this vn update i was shock and my hope get down that this vn Will update but eventually it update
Being honest, first seeing this vn I was a bit standoffish about it but then I played it. This vn is truly fantastic and I love each of its characters and each of their personallities bounce off of each other very naturally and the banter is great. I've only played through Red's route so far, but I am very excited to see where this story goes. Keep it up!
So let me start with something different now… Normally I would do some recounting of the whole story. But, is a bad idea since there is too much effort put in here that I do not want to spoil too much stuff. Normally I would do this: I mostly try to review per route but, I know there is just too much to cover it. So this time I’m going to do some key timings that I enjoyed while playing. After that I will review per department: Audio, Narration/writing, Art, and finally eye candy~. I know the game isn’t finished!
Before, I start doing a full review. Here is what I can say for anyone looking for a little push to start reading: If you can stand gore imagery and descriptions, go for it. It is more intense sometimes than Doom… and that is saying something. It is brutal sometimes. But, ignoring all gore. It does stand by a strong story and likable characters, only when they don’t go all demonic and chaotic full gore. Besides, their adventure is a fun one. I had a good deal of laughter, too many that I got my family members asking me if I was alright. I was enjoying the little talks and teasing to each other. It has a good atmosphere, and they focus on personality between them. I was immersed in the story since it does play a lot of realism in how a fantasy world would look like. If, it was taken realistically in the sense of fighting.
So first let’s go for personality:
Per character personality:
Akai, the main character, a lonely wolf: He is a mercenary, and earned a title for killing people in a certain way. I will save some info. He fights a lone, but with the new people he meets he gets a full 180 happening to him becoming a caring wolf. But, when meeting with our choices to date aka his future fellow demons… He becomes a Horny wolf if you want to make him. Also, he really did live by solitude sometimes. According to the time of the last build, he has lost 4 dear people he was trusting and considered family. Two of them were his family, the other 2 were fellow mercenary that help him.
Tchort, the ??????: This character is a prideful one. He enjoys torture and killing. And that is his good side. His altered personality or true demon form is a killing machine and is cold in the way he kills. He is a psychopath.
Red, the croc: This guy is a tsundere, but not the typical tsundere. He is stubborn and shows he doesn’t care for you… at first. If you interact with him more, it has a sweet spot for you. I choose him first. I enjoyed his interactions he will try to act all tough, but he actually is tough. But feelings are hard to hide. He cares for you if you try to break the barrier that he uses.
His alter personality or true demon form is a berserk fighter, and oh boy! Do not mess with him! He is dangerous~. Even if you do get him to try it with you, he will still try to do some damage to you. He still loses his temper so easily that he could destroy you. And he is brutal, all right. I almost puked after imagining the scenes during one of Akai’s nightmares. This scene was Red’s nightmare of distrust… and was agonizingly brutal.
Drago, the dragon: Drago is a teasing one. He loves to tease a lot. Also, he hates that people treat him all high and mighty due to him been a dragon. Additionally, he really is a lustful dragon if you meet him alone. In addition, he has some sense of high decency, if you can say that… His demon form or alter personality is an Eater of people… He can eat people whole. Also, he is a scary form to mess when he loses his control over that form.
Thayne, the bull: A timid yet social bull. He is more intelligent than the others. Knowing him, he has saved Akai so many times, and helped cool down his own friends when they become demon form and lose control. As an ally, he does talk a lot, and he is social once you get to know him. He will be there to guide you in the hard times. I have yet to see him lose his temper.
Havelock, the orca: A pirate of the sea. He does take care of his tripulation. To the point of sometimes comforting Akai when he is down. The alter personality of this orca is difficult for me to identify when he does go berserk. But, he does to try to liquid a certain character for his actions, and eventually he does somewhat succeed.
There is more, but for now is barely enough to make me understand the new followers.
Now let’s review per department.
Audio: On the spot, even the eerie scenes became stronger to the point of sending chills to my body. Not only for those scenes. Also, the battles were good and enjoyable, I had imagined some… but sometimes it was too much. >.<
Narration/writing: Story: It is strong and well-placed. I saw life in this world. And their people also were living beings, not just some random npc taking. All of them had their own lives. Characters: All of them are a good bunch, I had many fun experiences with them and how they interacted with each other.
One problem… There are some inconsistencies when following some paths. And informed one of them on the recent update devlog. Also, there were some orthography problems I noticed, but sometimes they made the serious moments more fun. I’m not going to lie, yes it ruins the scene, but man some of them are common. And yes, even I do have those issues. Actually, I have a habit of reading a lot of times over. But some common mistakes still pass without me knowing.
Art: Although is rough on some aspect, it does have a charm on it. It is constant and enjoyable to look at. As for the scenes, wow do they hold up even when is on weird angles. As for the gore… well, I’m happy that there is not too much of it. Or I would have a hard time eating while I was reading this VN. The eerie parts were spot on. I had some chills running down me.
Eye candy: There is a lot. And oh boy~. Did I enjoy the ones on my path? Yes. But, since it is shared with narration, for me, they feel a bit short. I do not mean the scenes, I mean the narration of the scene. But it is probably my thing. Anyway… They are steamy~ and enjoyable to read with the accompanied art. And Red as my to go for… he is a handful yet unexpected one to get into to. I dare to say that I had fun with him… Ye, lads! I’m crazy for this croc~!
Yeahh this VN is sooooo good and very exciting story line and i cried in the scene when hunter killed accidentally by wolf.. (sorry spoilers alert hhhe) really i like this.. May be you. Should be fixed some stuff of your Vn their are several spelling and grammar are wrong written.. I hope you fixe it... Hhhhhhw by the way you have a great job..... Good luck relly I don't care the horny stuff now i really care the flow of the story... Wewww... And hory stuff is a bunos hhhhhe
Actually, I’m enjoying it. I’m according to the number of the build… let’s say… Build 1.2: “A Dragon’s Story and his Darkest Secret”.
For now, I will say is a fresh air in something I was working on… Basically showing the gray side of evil. Since evil cant be actually completely define. This one works on the grey side, not the black and white we somewhat see in other games.
Yes, im building a fantasy world too… I have been inspired by many things, and now even this shows some of the same examples I was working with. Once I finish reading, I would like to ask the Dev if he is fine with me using some of the content for inspiration.
Also, if you can’t stop thinking about it, it means that is fantastic for you. Since not every game tents to stay on someone’s mind. A good game will be remembered and even used as an example of something.
This VN is a whirlwind of emotions especially this last update. I was crying during certain parts that just hit so damn much its beautiful. I give this game Ten out of Five. Very good work BigBuffDemonBoi, and don't fret too much on the grammar its quite passable. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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help me in day 5 the i alway died on and reastarting the Game again and again its still same i dont know why please Help me
Try saving before doing the dialogue?
can I still be able to get the key to that lusty tavern in future version if i choose to company Ruaden? i do not want make choice between Ruaden and that hot drake, guess I am really greedy😏
"AhoyLads". I would love to get havelock sex scene,or more naughty things with him
Will you make a chapter select screen in the future?
downloaded ver1.6 yesterday then got 1.6.5 today,what a coincidence^_^
All those characters are attractive,especially Red.he's really adorable when he got flushed or flustered,can't wait to see how cute he will be when he is topped and dominated(if there will be such sences)
Besides,just out of curiosity,how many routes will there be in total?
There will be but it may take long since red is special hehe, and as for the (if what you mean i) love routes, that is to not be decided yet since we're still close on the tip of the iceberg
Then the story should be much longer than I've expected, which is really great.hope there will be more cute or soft sides of Red to be revealed,just love the contrasts^_^
En cuanto sale la próxima actualización
You're just in time for the new update
how do i get past the scene where Tchort was taking over Aki i have been stuck on it for weeks
Even i dont know im stuck there too
Tbh i would let Drago own me
Can yall help me in day 5 the i alway died on i donnt know why please Help me
How can i survive 😭
Are there any nsfw scenes with Drago?
69 day ago.. funny number
Still waiting for next upd!
Please don't you dare to ever abandon this AMAZING VN. It is SOOO GOOOOD. I wish everything go perfect for you and you finish this masterpiece. All the best 😊
LOVE THIS VN SO MUCHH!!(≧▽≦)/
This VN is really great and making me cry 3 times on the backstory of aki when he lost Hunter,Mary and The couple mercenaries(╥﹏╥)
And probably one of the most fav thing in this VN is you can choose to be a top or bottom when doing that(✿ ♡‿♡)
Cant wait for future update(◍•ᴗ•◍)/
I play at the build 1.5 last time and i though oh this is good but when i see the last time this vn update i was shock and my hope get down that this vn Will update but eventually it update
Still waiting for the new update
is day 5 the last day cause i alway died on day 5 i donnt know why :
Being honest, first seeing this vn I was a bit standoffish about it but then I played it. This vn is truly fantastic and I love each of its characters and each of their personallities bounce off of each other very naturally and the banter is great. I've only played through Red's route so far, but I am very excited to see where this story goes. Keep it up!
I'm very glad that you liked the vn so far ^^
The update with come this month?
Im tryin my best to post it this month
Yee :>>
Yo necesito ayuda para pasar las tres preguntas
Which one?
How do I keep red from dieing right away
Just make sure to click "Talk to Red" again and again
I wanna ask,is there an scene where red let aki top?
I just want to ask even tho i like aki being a bottom
I've Planned for that in the future updates that he can top some of the demons he meet, so not to worry
How do I get red's scene? I've interacted with him as much as possible but I don't get the option after the coliseum
There should be an option "Apologize to him" after you walking up from the fight, choose that option
Ayuda por favor 🥺✨
que hago para sacar la escena con drago?
So let me start with something different now… Normally I would do some recounting of the whole story. But, is a bad idea since there is too much effort put in here that I do not want to spoil too much stuff. Normally I would do this: I mostly try to review per route but, I know there is just too much to cover it. So this time I’m going to do some key timings that I enjoyed while playing. After that I will review per department: Audio, Narration/writing, Art, and finally eye candy~. I know the game isn’t finished!
Before, I start doing a full review. Here is what I can say for anyone looking for a little push to start reading: If you can stand gore imagery and descriptions, go for it. It is more intense sometimes than Doom… and that is saying something. It is brutal sometimes. But, ignoring all gore. It does stand by a strong story and likable characters, only when they don’t go all demonic and chaotic full gore. Besides, their adventure is a fun one. I had a good deal of laughter, too many that I got my family members asking me if I was alright. I was enjoying the little talks and teasing to each other. It has a good atmosphere, and they focus on personality between them. I was immersed in the story since it does play a lot of realism in how a fantasy world would look like. If, it was taken realistically in the sense of fighting.
So first let’s go for personality:
Per character personality:
Akai, the main character, a lonely wolf: He is a mercenary, and earned a title for killing people in a certain way. I will save some info. He fights a lone, but with the new people he meets he gets a full 180 happening to him becoming a caring wolf. But, when meeting with our choices to date aka his future fellow demons… He becomes a Horny wolf if you want to make him. Also, he really did live by solitude sometimes. According to the time of the last build, he has lost 4 dear people he was trusting and considered family. Two of them were his family, the other 2 were fellow mercenary that help him.
Tchort, the ??????: This character is a prideful one. He enjoys torture and killing. And that is his good side. His altered personality or true demon form is a killing machine and is cold in the way he kills. He is a psychopath.
Red, the croc: This guy is a tsundere, but not the typical tsundere. He is stubborn and shows he doesn’t care for you… at first. If you interact with him more, it has a sweet spot for you. I choose him first. I enjoyed his interactions he will try to act all tough, but he actually is tough. But feelings are hard to hide. He cares for you if you try to break the barrier that he uses.
His alter personality or true demon form is a berserk fighter, and oh boy! Do not mess with him! He is dangerous~. Even if you do get him to try it with you, he will still try to do some damage to you. He still loses his temper so easily that he could destroy you. And he is brutal, all right. I almost puked after imagining the scenes during one of Akai’s nightmares. This scene was Red’s nightmare of distrust… and was agonizingly brutal.
Drago, the dragon: Drago is a teasing one. He loves to tease a lot. Also, he hates that people treat him all high and mighty due to him been a dragon. Additionally, he really is a lustful dragon if you meet him alone. In addition, he has some sense of high decency, if you can say that… His demon form or alter personality is an Eater of people… He can eat people whole. Also, he is a scary form to mess when he loses his control over that form.
Thayne, the bull: A timid yet social bull. He is more intelligent than the others. Knowing him, he has saved Akai so many times, and helped cool down his own friends when they become demon form and lose control. As an ally, he does talk a lot, and he is social once you get to know him. He will be there to guide you in the hard times. I have yet to see him lose his temper.
Havelock, the orca: A pirate of the sea. He does take care of his tripulation. To the point of sometimes comforting Akai when he is down. The alter personality of this orca is difficult for me to identify when he does go berserk. But, he does to try to liquid a certain character for his actions, and eventually he does somewhat succeed.
There is more, but for now is barely enough to make me understand the new followers.
Now let’s review per department.
Audio: On the spot, even the eerie scenes became stronger to the point of sending chills to my body. Not only for those scenes. Also, the battles were good and enjoyable, I had imagined some… but sometimes it was too much. >.<
Narration/writing: Story: It is strong and well-placed. I saw life in this world. And their people also were living beings, not just some random npc taking. All of them had their own lives. Characters: All of them are a good bunch, I had many fun experiences with them and how they interacted with each other.
One problem… There are some inconsistencies when following some paths. And informed one of them on the recent update devlog. Also, there were some orthography problems I noticed, but sometimes they made the serious moments more fun. I’m not going to lie, yes it ruins the scene, but man some of them are common. And yes, even I do have those issues. Actually, I have a habit of reading a lot of times over. But some common mistakes still pass without me knowing.
Art: Although is rough on some aspect, it does have a charm on it. It is constant and enjoyable to look at. As for the scenes, wow do they hold up even when is on weird angles. As for the gore… well, I’m happy that there is not too much of it. Or I would have a hard time eating while I was reading this VN. The eerie parts were spot on. I had some chills running down me.
Eye candy: There is a lot. And oh boy~. Did I enjoy the ones on my path? Yes. But, since it is shared with narration, for me, they feel a bit short. I do not mean the scenes, I mean the narration of the scene. But it is probably my thing. Anyway… They are steamy~ and enjoyable to read with the accompanied art. And Red as my to go for… he is a handful yet unexpected one to get into to. I dare to say that I had fun with him… Ye, lads! I’m crazy for this croc~!
Yeahh this VN is sooooo good and very exciting story line and i cried in the scene when hunter killed accidentally by wolf.. (sorry spoilers alert hhhe) really i like this.. May be you. Should be fixed some stuff of your Vn their are several spelling and grammar are wrong written.. I hope you fixe it... Hhhhhhw by the way you have a great job..... Good luck relly I don't care the horny stuff now i really care the flow of the story... Wewww... And hory stuff is a bunos hhhhhe
I literally don't care about the horny stuff anymore,im so into this story you've create
Oh? Is it that good? I might as well give it a try… This one has been under my radar to read. Now let’s see how good is it.
im not sure this story is good enough for you,but somehow I just can't stop thinking about it.i hope you can enjoy it
Actually, I’m enjoying it. I’m according to the number of the build… let’s say… Build 1.2: “A Dragon’s Story and his Darkest Secret”.
For now, I will say is a fresh air in something I was working on… Basically showing the gray side of evil. Since evil cant be actually completely define. This one works on the grey side, not the black and white we somewhat see in other games.
Yes, im building a fantasy world too… I have been inspired by many things, and now even this shows some of the same examples I was working with. Once I finish reading, I would like to ask the Dev if he is fine with me using some of the content for inspiration.
Also, if you can’t stop thinking about it, it means that is fantastic for you. Since not every game tents to stay on someone’s mind. A good game will be remembered and even used as an example of something.
Is it just me or wasnt there an nsfw sence with croc after the colosseum. I remember there being on before but its not there now?
Oh? Ill check up this bug
Rip Bruce and Corvus
This VN is a whirlwind of emotions especially this last update. I was crying during certain parts that just hit so damn much its beautiful. I give this game Ten out of Five. Very good work BigBuffDemonBoi, and don't fret too much on the grammar its quite passable. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
I need to ask
When i saw The scene and dialogue witch torch that we had in the end of this build.
My first thouth was, do we have begining of route for tchort?
Anyway i will like to See MC and Tchort as couple :)
And i like this build the new part of story was wonderfull, have a good day cant wait for next update.
(sorry if i write somthing wrong my english is not perfect)
It's indescribable how much I like this story
Sorry But, This is A Persistent problem... Unfit text
I'll separate it and will be fixed on the next update
about 3 question in the game which choice should i pick in order not to get game over
im having the same problem
What are you talking about? I know there are ways to get game overs, but I only see those in battles...where is it happening?
the dragon god ask 3 question what are they to ou, who do you save first, who you love most after i play the game but get game over
Ahh that conflict, way before that before you sleep, you HAVE to talk to Red
i tried talking but the game keeps asking me many times till it forces me to go to bed
just keep clicking "Talk to Red"
Yay, very good update, I love them all 🥰, they are so beautiful and hot
Oooohhh yes finally. I've yearn for an update! Looking forward for more! No matter how long the wait, just wishing you would finish it
Here are some of the things you need to know if you want to see the new nsfws:
1st nsfw-You must have the first nsfw of a certain croc
2nd nsfw-Proceed with the story
3rd nsfw-Make sure to check up on a certain blue derg
Just posting this here so no ones gonna fill up the comments with questions about it :3
thanks croco :3 I was looking forward to this update
i just finished version 1.5 and i cant wait for a new version to comeout the game is great so far!
Its still alive and slowly running,just cant focus on it because of irl situations, educations and stuff
ok who decided to kill a dragon at 2020 because the creator is still mad