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Interesting concept,though the grammar really needs work (I feel like I was having an aneurysm reading this)

Have you considered getting someone to proofread for you?

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Holy crap this novel is amazing! I finally have an interesting novel about demons and magic and whatnot...really great job!!

Thanks, Im glad you liked the novel!

By chance is there any plans to release an OS X version? Just from reading the description and seeing peoples comments makes this vn look very cool.

With how complicated Apple seems to makes their “acceptance procedure,” it might be a while. I know some other creators have look into it but most if not all are hesitant to because of how Apple handles their guidelines and whatnot

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This is a cool visual novel and one person doing all the work good job your doing good story so far. thanks need more red sex tho. im gonna play them all tho i like the story.

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Heh, eager for Red eh? Dont worry, and thanks! Glad you liked the VN

Why Drago introduce himself twice?

Ahh mustve been a bug, Ill take care of it

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This was AMAZING. Now, I am going to patiently wait for the next update, dont mind mee <3

Heh, I'm glad you like it!

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hunter's death scene reminded me of koro sensei's from ansatsu kyoushitsu and made me almost cry. still loved the story tho (except that one scen where havenlock almost got raped, and at that moment i was like "stay away from my husbando". But then again the fact that i actually felt it means how well written the story is).

Mhm mhm, lots of people are in love with Havelock

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I need thayne!!!

Oh you will get em on the next update, hehe~

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While not perfect due to grammatical errors, it's very refreshing to see an evil main character! Can't wait to destroy another city!

Heh, Can't wait indeed

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I love this!!!

I want more Drago and Havlock <3

Heh, glad you love it!

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Hey BBDB, i started playing your game yesterday and i have to say, i've very much enjoyed every bit of the story. The art style is also amazing and the demons are wicked.

I do have a suggestion though: if you can add a "Hide" option to hide the text chat-box, so the player can fully view the background and artsyles (because again, they are awesome). I'm playing the android version, and i would love if you can take this suggestion into consideration. Thank you so much for this VN regardless.

Thanks! And I'll try to add a hide button in android, I'm glad you liked the game^^

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Love the VN, it's great. The Overlord theme (Voracity) is something though lol. Is this inspired by it by any chance? Playing as the villains and all!

"I just want to eat, how taste it is?" 

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Hehe perhaps, I really love villains being the protagonists, pretty unique, that's why I made this VN.

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Is there a place where we can put corrections for grammar? I'd be happy to do it! Otherwise I am enjoying the game so far! Keep up the good work.

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I love the game! The world-building is well written and it kept me interested! The characters are unique but Thayne is my favorite because he is calm and collected. The MC is also down to earth and very likeable! I can't wait for future updates!

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Oooh the first one who likes the bull, thanks! And Im very glad that you liked the game! ^w^

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Love it. I want to see more of Drago's, Havelock's and Red's route. Drago and Red are my #1 favorites!

Heh, both of them are everyone's favorite now eh? Glad you loved the game^^

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You know it ;)

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this game is wicked! i love the story line and there are so many decisions and paths to take, it makes it so interesting.

I'm very glad that you loved the game^^

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IM not sure if this is a bug but when 2 charathers have the same ammount of like points It triggers both of their dialog it happens after the flashback and when they tell us that the dinner is ready in the Inn my 2 was Thayne and Havelock. Love the game BTW keep it up!!!!

Ahh, did that on purpose cuz hav is just an extra character for now whos supporting you, and glad you liked the game^^

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Wow, the game is amazing, and I liked the characters. They are all sweet, the story enters your world. Thank you for your hard work and I am excited about the upcoming updates.

Thanks! And I'm glad you liked the game!

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Hehe, very glad to hear that! Red may be a stubborn croco, but we all know every stubborn character has a different side, a good one >w<

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Thanks!

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The protagonist needs some re-working. He reacts very childishly...

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I do hope you are taking breaks and time off. I may be looking forward to the next update but I don't want you to push yourself too much or too hard. You're doing damn near everything yourself and it's pretty fuckin' admirable and impressive, to me at least.

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Ahh, Thank you so much ^^

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Is there just one 18+ scene ?

If have more ,can I have a guide?

Theres only one for now, there will be another in the future updates

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Wow, love this already <3 Can't wait to see more :D I gotta ask will Havelock be a romanceable character? I'm already in love with him and Red <3

oh, probably, for now Havelock is an extra character, but may be possible to be a romanceable character in the future, and I'm very glad you liked it ^^ (sorry if you must've faced some bugs)

Do you download it on Android?😢😢💔💔💔💔💔💔💔

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Its now available!

Cool 😆🏃🏽‍♂️🏃🏽‍♂️

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cool~

Got that error while playing

Fixed, Im very sorry for the inconvience, I think you should download it again :)

Okay, cool!

Looking forward to play the next updates!

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Thanks! The next update is almost there! ^^

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